Dragons with attitude

More Middle-grade adventures

I’ve been spending time reading through the best-selling Wings of Fire series by Tui T. Sutherland. Very entertaining, and great examples of story-telling craft.

Narrative voice and well-defined characters are why these books are so successful. Sutherland clearly lays out “here’s this character’s temperament, attitude, goals” and you know by the end of the story the crises will directly challenge all of those things.

I have enjoyed all of the books so far but I didn’t *like* all the main characters. Some I like a lot more than others, and I suspect the author did too. That, to me, is actually the most interesting aspect of the series, because it tells me what I as a reader wanted from the story. And what makes a successful hero.

I should explain that each book is told from a different character’s point of view. So you may really love one character, but boom, in the next book you have to identify with a new one.

I want courage and heroism and character growth if I am going to identify with the point of view character. If they’re cowardly, betray their friends, refuse to help others in need, then I don’t want to identify with them. And yet some of these characters do just that. I was shaking my head, wondering why we had to go there. Sure, it leaves a lot of room for character development, but it also leaves a bad taste in my mouth.

Who gets to be a hero?

And yet my favorite character in the series so far is a mass murderer. There’s a lot of violence in the series, and I am ambivalent about it. But it doesn’t seem to have the same impact as it would if these were human characters. Dragons are naturally violent; or so the dragons invested in the ongoing war claim. Our heroes don’t agree with this familiar human argument.

Peril burns everything she touches; she can’t help it, it was the way she was born. An evil queen uses her as a weapon of punishment. Peril obeys her because she doesn’t know any better, until someone points out she doesn’t have to do this, that she could choose something else. How do you stop being a weapon of mass destruction? Now that’s a moral journey.

This happens in the first book of the series. When we get to Peril’s own book, we see her attempts to change who she is, as she tries to figure out how to be a good, likable dragon, even though most dragons shun her, hating her for what’s she’s done in the past.

Peril says what other people think but would never say out loud. She’s rude, blunt, and funny. She’s also smart. We don’t mind identifying with her — she’s trying, she helps others, she would do anything for the dragon she’s besotted with, and in the end she proves she really has changed, because of the choices she makes.

Peril’s character is transgressive – she doesn’t bother to be socially appropriate and polite, because that’s not going to work for her anyway. She will never be ‘acceptable.’ And we can vicariously enjoy being rude and dangerous and courageous at the same time.

She’s a great hero. I just wish she’d come back in another book.

Middle-grade point of view

It’s my second summer of reading middle-grade books and I’ve been having a great time.

A couple of marvelous books stand out.

The first is The Truth as Told by Mason Buttle. I am usually not a big fan of realistic novels for this age group because they tend to be reductionist (“here’s the bully, here’s the inattentive parent, here’s our hero battling odds, here’s the specific trendy problem that appeals to NY publishers…”) and at first glance this seems like it fits all those categories.

But someone told me this was a great book, so I tried the first few pages and was hooked.

So how is this different? Mason’s narrative voice.

Leslie Connor pulled off something extremely hard to do: she gave us a first-person POV with an unreliable narrator who is extremely appealing. Mason doesn’t understand everything that he records as part of his story–but we do. Mason is fun to hang out with, and we end up liking him a lot, just as most of the people around him do. Yes, there are quite a few adults who should be paying more attention, but the reasons they don’t see what’s happening are believable, and mean no one except the actual bad guy looks anything other than human.

Mason has some pretty serious problems: extreme dyslexia, abnormal sweating, he’s too big for his age, and his parents are dead. Kids call him stupid, and it seems he doesn’t read other people’s emotions as well as we can, just from his descriptions. He lives with his grandmother and his uncle. Their lives were turned upside down by the death of Mason’s parents and by the death of Mason’s best friend — in mysterious circumstances. It is this mystery that’s the spine of the plot.

I won’t give too much away because it’s such a fun book to read you should discover it for yourself. My only quibble is that the villain was so completely villainous, and I wasn’t comfortable with the implication that his bad behavior was caused by an absent father. But we don’t really know much about the villain’s motivations, and it doesn’t really matter, because Mason is the star.

It was great to spend time with him, with Ms. Blinny (I loved Ms. Blinny) and the people in Mason’s world.